zackster the mix is good, but the sound quality is lacking for sure, which is odd given that you mixed it in ableton. it’s a bit quiet, could probably use compression, but it’s tough to apply a single compression setting over a long mix.
i’m not sure i can help, but i’d be happy to take a crack at it just for the sake of the exercise if you want. it’ll probably end up sounding worse lol, but i don’t mind trying.